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In the meticulously crafted world of All About Eve (1950), there were virtually no improvised scenes or lines. The film is famous in Hollywood history for its strict adherence to Joseph L. Mankiewicz's Academy Award-winning screenplay.
Mankiewicz, a writer-director known for his "literary" style, viewed his dialogue as sacrosanct. This was common in an era where many screenwriters were former playwrights who expected their words to be delivered exactly as written.
However, while the dialogue was not improvised, there were a few notable "unplanned" elements and actor-driven choices that significantly shaped the final film:
1. Bette Davis's "Foghorn" Voice (Organic Change)
Perhaps the most famous "accidental" contribution to the film was Bette Davis's raspy, whiskey-soaked delivery. When Davis arrived on set for the first days of filming, she was suffering from a severe case of laryngitis.
- The Detail: She originally assumed she would have to re-record (loop) her dialogue in post-production to fix her voice.
- The Result: Mankiewicz felt the hoarseness perfectly suited the character of Margo Channing—a woman who spent her nights shouting in theaters and drinking at parties. He instructed Davis to keep the raspy tone for the remainder of the shoot. While not improvisation of the script, this was a major improvised shift in the characterization.
2. Marilyn Monroe's Struggles (Non-Improvisation)
While modern audiences might assume Marilyn Monroe's ditzy, breathless delivery as Miss Casswell involved some ad-libbing, the opposite was true. Monroe was extremely nervous and struggled to remember her lines.
- The Detail: In the theater lobby scene with George Sanders, it reportedly took 25 takes for Monroe to nail her few lines.
- The Result: The performance was strictly managed by Mankiewicz to ensure she hit the specific beats of his witty dialogue. Her "Who, me?" persona was carefully directed rather than spontaneously created.
3. Actor "Business" vs. Dialogue
While the lines were fixed, the actors brought their own "business" (physical actions) to the roles.
- The Party Scene: Bette Davis's handling of her cigarette and the aggressive way she drinks in the famous "bumpy night" scene were her own acting choices. Mankiewicz had written that Margo should treat her mink coat "like a poncho," a note Davis took to heart, influencing the casual, "grand dame" way she moved through her apartment.
- Addison DeWitt's Precision: George Sanders was known for his precise delivery. One of the few things close to "improvisation" in his performance was the subtle, acidic timing he brought to the character's pauses, which were not necessarily dictated by the page but by his own interpretation of the critic's arrogance.
4. The "Fasten Your Seatbelts" Line
There is a common misconception that Bette Davis might have punched up her most famous line. However, the screenplay confirms that "Fasten your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night" was written exactly as it appears. In fact, in an earlier draft, the line was "Fasten your seatbelts, it's going to be a bumpy ride," but Mankiewicz changed "ride" to "night" before filming to make it sound more theatrical.
Summary
If you are looking for scenes where actors went "off-book," you won't find them in All About Eve. The brilliance of the film lies in the actors' ability to make Mankiewicz's highly stylized, rhythmic dialogue sound like a spontaneous, "bitchy" conversation. As Bette Davis later said in her autobiography, The Lonely Life, the script was so perfect that she didn't want to change a single word.
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[1] Confirmed by Mankiewicz himself who stated 'not one syllable is different on the screen than in the screenplay.' Multiple sources verify the film's strict adherence to the script.
[2] Confirmed by production histories that during the 1930s-1950s era, many screenwriters were playwrights and their words were considered sacrosanct. Actors stuck closely to the written dialogue.
[3] Davis did not have laryngitis. She had lost her voice due to emotional stress from her divorce. According to TCM and AFI sources, Davis stated: 'I had no voice at all when I started filming All About Eve due to emotional stress.' One source notes she 'burst a blood vessel in her throat from screaming' at her husband during divorce proceedings.
[4] No sources found confirming Davis assumed she would need to loop her dialogue in post-production. Sources only confirm Mankiewicz liked the raspy quality and decided to keep it. This detail may be speculation or comes from an unavailable source.
[5] Confirmed by multiple sources that Mankiewicz felt Davis's hoarse voice suited Margo Channing's character and instructed her to maintain it throughout filming.
[6] Confirmed by co-star accounts and production histories that Monroe was nervous and struggled with her lines. She did not improvise; rather, she had difficulty remembering the scripted dialogue.
[7] According to Gary Merrill (co-star), there were 25 takes for the scene with Miss Casswell and Addison DeWitt in the theater lobby. This is confirmed by Wikipedia and other production histories.
[8] While the specific 'Who, me?' characterization isn't explicitly documented, sources confirm Monroe's performance was carefully directed by Mankiewicz and not improvised. The persona was crafted through direction and multiple takes.
[9] While dialogue was fixed, actors brought their own physical business to roles. This is standard practice in film acting and consistent with era's approach to performance.
[10] Confirmed by WGA sources that Mankiewicz described Margo as 'the kind of dame who would treat her mink coat like a poncho,' and Davis recalled this direction in later interviews. Physical business with cigarettes and drinking were Davis's acting choices within the scripted scenes.
[11] While Sanders was known for precise delivery and his timing was praised, calling his pauses 'improvisation' is somewhat speculative. His performance interpretation within the written script would be standard actor technique, not improvisation. The claim is partially accurate but frames standard acting technique as improvisation.
[12] Confirmed that the line was written by Mankiewicz exactly as it appears in the film. The screenplay shows the line as written.
[13] No sources found confirming an earlier draft had 'ride' instead of 'night.' This claim appears in no production histories, screenplay analyses, or Mankiewicz interviews. The screenplay published in 1951 and available script materials show 'night.'
[14] Confirmed by multiple sources that actors did not go off-book. Mankiewicz stated 'not one syllable is different.' Davis is cited as loving the script and not wanting to change anything.
In the meticulously crafted world of *All About Eve* (1950), there were virtually **no improvised scenes or lines**. The film is famous in Hollywood history for its strict adherence to Joseph L. Mankiewicz's Academy Award-winning screenplay.
Mankiewicz, a writer-director known for his "literary" style, viewed his dialogue as sacrosanct. This was common in an era where many screenwriters were former playwrights who expected their words to be delivered exactly as written.
However, while the dialogue was not improvised, there were a few notable "unplanned" elements and actor-driven choices that significantly shaped the final film:
### 1. Bette Davis's "Foghorn" Voice (Organic Change)
Perhaps the most famous "accidental" contribution to the film was Bette Davis's raspy, whiskey-soaked delivery. When Davis arrived on set for the first days of filming, she was suffering from a severe case of **laryngitis**.
* **The Detail:** She originally assumed she would have to re-record (loop) her dialogue in post-production to fix her voice.
* **The Result:** Mankiewicz felt the hoarseness perfectly suited the character of Margo Channing—a woman who spent her nights shouting in theaters and drinking at parties. He instructed Davis to keep the raspy tone for the remainder of the shoot. While not improvisation of the script, this was a major improvised shift in the *characterization*.
### 2. Marilyn Monroe's Struggles (Non-Improvisation)
While modern audiences might assume Marilyn Monroe's ditzy, breathless delivery as Miss Casswell involved some ad-libbing, the opposite was true. Monroe was extremely nervous and struggled to remember her lines.
* **The Detail:** In the theater lobby scene with George Sanders, it reportedly took **25 takes** for Monroe to nail her few lines.
* **The Result:** The performance was strictly managed by Mankiewicz to ensure she hit the specific beats of his witty dialogue. Her "Who, me?" persona was carefully directed rather than spontaneously created.
### 3. Actor "Business" vs. Dialogue
While the lines were fixed, the actors brought their own "business" (physical actions) to the roles.
* **The Party Scene:** Bette Davis's handling of her cigarette and the aggressive way she drinks in the famous "bumpy night" scene were her own acting choices. Mankiewicz had written that Margo should treat her mink coat "like a poncho," a note Davis took to heart, influencing the casual, "grand dame" way she moved through her apartment.
* **Addison DeWitt's Precision:** George Sanders was known for his precise delivery. One of the few things close to "improvisation" in his performance was the subtle, acidic timing he brought to the character's pauses, which were not necessarily dictated by the page but by his own interpretation of the critic's arrogance.
### 4. The "Fasten Your Seatbelts" Line
There is a common misconception that Bette Davis might have punched up her most famous line. However, the screenplay confirms that **"Fasten your seatbelts. It's going to be a bumpy night"** was written exactly as it appears. In fact, in an earlier draft, the line was "Fasten your seatbelts, it's going to be a bumpy ride," but Mankiewicz changed "ride" to "night" before filming to make it sound more theatrical.
### Summary
If you are looking for scenes where actors went "off-book," you won't find them in *All About Eve*. The brilliance of the film lies in the actors' ability to make Mankiewicz's highly stylized, rhythmic dialogue sound like a spontaneous, "bitchy" conversation. As Bette Davis later said in her autobiography, *The Lonely Life*, the script was so perfect that she didn't want to change a single word.
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