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Yes, Elliott Gould improvised a significant amount of his dialogue and behavior in The Long Goodbye (1973). Working with director Robert Altman, who encouraged spontaneity, Gould improvised key character elements including the recurring line "It's okay with me," the "mumbling" stream-of-consciousness delivery, and the famous scene where he smears fingerprint ink on his face while singing "Swanee" at the police station. He also improvised much of the opening sequence with the cat (involving the fictional "Courry Brand" cat food) and his reactions to the "naked neighbors."
Based on internal knowledge of the production of Robert Altman’s 1973 film The Long Goodbye, the answer is yes, Elliott Gould improvised a significant portion of his dialogue and character business, though he worked within the narrative framework provided by Leigh Brackett’s screenplay.
Robert Altman was famous for a "collaborative" and "loose" directing style that prioritized naturalism and spontaneity over strict adherence to a script. In Gould’s case, this resulted in a performance defined by a constant, semi-coherent stream of consciousness.
Here are specific details regarding Gould’s improvisation in the film:
The most famous recurring line in the movie—"It’s okay with me"—was not a major fixture of the original script. Gould used it as a rhythmic device to define his version of Philip Marlowe. He viewed the character as a "Rip Van Marlowe," a man who had been asleep for 20 years and woke up in the 1970s. The phrase was Gould’s way of showing Marlowe’s passive-aggressive detachment from the modern world. He improvised the timing and frequency of this line throughout the shoot.
One of the most famous improvised moments occurs when Marlowe is being interrogated at the police station. While being fingerprinted, Gould spontaneously decided to smear the black ink all over his own face, rubbing it in like a mask or "blackface" and singing a bit of "Swanee." This was not in the script. Gould did it to express Marlowe’s utter contempt for the police and the absurdity of the situation. The reactions of the other actors in that scene are genuine surprise.
The extended opening scene where Marlowe tries to trick his cat into eating a different brand of cat food (Courry Brand) is heavily reliant on Gould’s improvised muttering. While the plot point of the cat wanting a specific food was scripted, Gould’s specific dialogue—the way he argues with the cat and talks to himself while preparing the "con"—was largely ad-libbed to establish Marlowe’s loneliness and his eccentric domestic life.
Altman pioneered the use of multi-track recording, which allowed actors to talk over one another. Gould took full advantage of this by constantly muttering under his breath. Much of what Marlowe says while other characters are talking (especially during scenes with the "Sterling Hayden" character, Roger Wade) was Gould reacting in the moment. This created the "mumble" effect that characterized his performance, making Marlowe seem like he was living in his own private world.
In the scenes where Marlowe interacts with his yoga-practicing, often-nude neighbors, Gould improvised his awkward, slightly confused reactions. His dialogue about their "brownies" and his general bemusement was developed on the day of filming to contrast his "old-fashioned" persona with the "New Age" culture of 1970s California.
While Leigh Brackett (who also co-wrote the 1946 version of The Big Sleep) provided the hardboiled structure and the cynical ending, Elliott Gould provided the "connective tissue." His performance is essentially a jazz-like improvisation on the theme of a private eye, with Robert Altman giving him the "keys to the car" to drive the character wherever Gould's intuition took him.
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